At night the stars shine
Along with the moon
As long as ur looking up
There is nothing to hide
Just close your eyes
For there is wonder beyond
The inside of your mind
Night time, day time
No matter where you are
As long as the inside
Is honest and pure
There is nothing to fear
And nothing gets old
The rhythm in this poem is great. It flows very well and the wording swings the sentences together in a smooth manner. I like the imagery of the stars shining with the moon and the sentences "as long as ur looking up there is nothing to hide" adds a type of innocent feel to the tone.
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